Issue 4 - March 2026 - Editor’s Choice
dry grass
fading wildflowers
when you came
into this world
you didn't come to stay
Jim Chessing, USA
- Inspired by the traditional blues song, Hard, Oh Lord, "Odetta and the Blues," Riverside, 1962.
This is a tanka that I don’t believe AI, however advanced, would ever be able to imitate beyond the most superficial level. The tanka that resonate most, for me, are those that show a depth of feeling, not by declaring it but by quiet observation plus a very human quality: engagement and involvement in the world. The best tanka show that the author is not just an observer, not just skilled with words and images, they also have skin in the game, they care.
Congratulations Jim on your masterfully written tanka!
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